It's wonderful

though it flows slowly

but i couldn't qit reading it to the end
then read it again

5/5

Usually I don't read non-rhyming poems, because nine and a half times out of ten I dislike them a huge amount, but this I must say I enjoyed. To be honest, I very rarely give works 5/5 ratings because I've decided to be more strict, mainly because everyone else gives out 5/5 ratings like their lives depend on them. Ordinarily I might have given this piece a 4/5, but given my 'love' for non-rhyming poems, and how much I liked this in spite of that, I felt it deserved a 5/5. Mostly I loved the emotion. Hope I didn't rabbit on for too long for you, sorry if I did.

Brad

P.S. I read that quote from your granmother's poem book about helping others and I thought it was very good. Plus, that's how I feel anyway. Been trying to convince others, but have only had...hm...um...not great results, lol.

Sorry, me again. Also, I wanted to say that I absolutely loved the title. It's very eye catching and enticing, also known as great, lol.

Brad

I loved thie piece. well writen. 5/5

I LIKE It!!!