Outcast

by A Phoenyx in Flight   Jan 29, 2008


Separated from the rest.
The feeling of not belonging
growing in the pit of her stomach.
She slips through the halls unnoticed.
She gets through her classes unheard.

No one hears or notices.
The girl with her noise
always stuck in a book.
The girl with the long black hair.
No one knows the suffering she endures.

No one knows the boyfriend
she fears.
Or how she gets the bruises.
They cant see the pain
behind the long black hair.
And even if they could,
she bets they wouldn't even care.

(this is about my best friend margarete she had an abusive boyfriend and this is what she felt like. but she knows now that her best friend will always be there for her no matter what)

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  • 16 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    This poem had pretty good structure. There were a few things like "noise" where I think you meant to put "nose" and the new line just for the words "she fears" that made the fow not quite as smooth as it could of been, but you did a good job of describing things again. 4/5