I loved your poem, the same thing happened to me.. expect he told me a year later wich was still too late,, cause i moved on..
My favorite was:
You could have had my soul
Two years and a broken heart ago

5/5
take care x

This poem is absolutely stunning. I love it. And I can totally relate to the situation. I agree, I love these lines:
"You could have had my soul
Two years and a broken heart ago"
There's a lot of power in the tone of this piece. Well done =)
5/5.

"Does this kill you like it killed me?
To know what you want, and watch it leave."

"Because now you know what it's like on my end
To watch the one you love, say you should stay friends"

I loved these two parts. They honestly took my breath away because they reminded me so much of a situation I was in a year ago. A truly enjoyable read. 5/5

GOSH ! i <3 THIS ONE TOO . lmao :)
you're an amazing writer. you so
inspire mee .

GOSH ! i <3 THIS ONE TOO . lmao :)
you're an amazing writer. you so
inspire mee .