Comments : Jealousy

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Amen - I know the feeling, keep up the good writes

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    I don't know why, but I really liked this..

    That's not an insult! haha, I mean that my usual taste in poetry is elaborate, in depth, metaphorical and more lengthy poems. This one is obviously quite blunt, and a bit stubby..but I think it's the simplicity that I really like!
    Basically it's exposing a universal feeling in a very open way, and I like it. The structure works well for it too

    Good read*