Build Me Two Walls (Collab)

by Italian Stallion   Jan 29, 2008


Yelling and screaming,
Baby, tell me what happened to our love?
Struggling to find an answer-
You're all that I am thinking of.

Someone build me two walls
I need them to hide behind,
For tears are now falling
Oh what have I done?

I have lost my one and only love
It feels as if a part of me has died;
Please come back to me my love,
I don't want anyone else but you...

Just one more chance is all I ask,
I'm reaching out to be with you.
You're all I think about night and day,
And how I want you here to stay.

© Copyright 2008 By: Italian Stallion and Amber

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Collaboration with Amber

Amber: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=261132
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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Fantastic job on this one. :] You've taken an idea that can be considered cliche' at times, and turned it into a magnificent, unique piece of poetry. You two work very well together in poetry. :] Beautifully done. Overall: 5.5

    -- Steph.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is cute, but not one of my favorites from you, the flow seemed to be a little rough, maybe forced... but still pretty good... 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Awww..dat was sad...hope she'll give u another chance..goodluck..

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