Awww..dat was sad...hope she'll give u another chance..goodluck..

This is cute, but not one of my favorites from you, the flow seemed to be a little rough, maybe forced... but still pretty good... 4/5

Fantastic job on this one. :] You've taken an idea that can be considered cliche' at times, and turned it into a magnificent, unique piece of poetry. You two work very well together in poetry. :] Beautifully done. Overall: 5.5

-- Steph.