Very Sweet..and sOoo CUte...

Ehehe that was cute and sweet, but I didn't like it as much as your other poems. It wasn't very vivid though, but the rhyming scheme was interesting :)

Hehe very clever, i really liked it its so cute... i've never read a Monorhyme but i liked it a lot. GREAT JOB... 5/5

Quite clever pretty good

I love this form. I doubt that I'll be able to master it as you did, but I'd love to attempt it one day. :]
You wrote this poem beautifully. It was unique, creative, and incredibly sweet. Amazing job. (: Overall: 5.5

-- Steph.

I Like that form. I've never heard of a monoryhme Before but i may just start using it...o.o...^^
5/5
Keep Writing

-Ally