by Poet on the Piano Jan 29, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
In a winter wonderland of snow, |
This poem is a great accurate description of how i feel about winter too. so nice job, i like it alot. |
Aww, I liked it. The title reminded me of this book I read called "Dreamland". I loved that book. Anyways, I thought the flow was off a bit, and some of the rhymes felt forced. Also, some of the words didn't really rhyme well, but I loved the idea! :] |
by Lemma
Another really feel-good poem. Describes winter perfectly, I love the idea of "pixie dust" is really sweet. Em xXx |