Comments : A Dreamland of Beauty

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Another really feel-good poem. Describes winter perfectly, I love the idea of "pixie dust" is really sweet. Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww, I liked it. The title reminded me of this book I read called "Dreamland". I loved that book. Anyways, I thought the flow was off a bit, and some of the rhymes felt forced. Also, some of the words didn't really rhyme well, but I loved the idea! :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by christopherinchaos

    This poem is a great accurate description of how i feel about winter too. so nice job, i like it alot.

    chris.