Bubbles

Now this is more like it we all love bubbles and its very reassuring that you do to. Using them as a parallel to life is ingenious and show that you have a poets mind and the promise of the other poem of yours I read are at last coming to fruition.
Your poem had nice balance and is thought provoking a winner well done. Ray S definitely a 5/5.

Aw what a beautiful poem.. It really gives off a fun carefree feeling. Kind of reminds me of Summer. I love the whole friendship and bubbles theme and the way you described the bubbles really painted a pretty picture. You did an amazing job with this poem and i love how you dedicated it to any friend that needs a poem! Amazing job once again. I really enjoyed reading it and it made me smile =) Keep it up. 5/5 and thanks for the comment!

Really sweet, simple and honest. Felt really natural in both rhyme and flow. I love the title as well, it's really clever and is reflected perfectly in these lines:

"Bouncing from place to place
Never a focused thought
Going where life takes them
With a trust that can't be brought"

"Brought" should perhaps be changed to "bought" if you mean buying with money. But other than that this is an awesome poem. 5/5

Em xXx

Oh I just loved this one. Has to be one of my fave friendship poems I have read on this site. It was so unique and I loved how cleverly you connect your friend to a bubble... nice play on words. Well done *5/5*

Cute poem... I love the concept of this poem. Bubbles and friendship! Woo! It's an all around happy poem... :)