One of the most painful poems i have ever read this is all i can say...

DYING it suits the poem well

This poem is really sad. You show here how much you suffer. This is a poem many can relate to. Also, you used the words torment/torture lots of times which emphesizes your pain. The flow and choosing of words were great 5/5

OMG!!!
this is so painful and amazing 5/5

It's evident in this poem that you are great with rhyming. It doesn't sound forced at all. I like this a lot 5/5

Painful... Give a damn to pain cuz life has so much of love & once one understands it than who would wanna die... who would wanna cry in loneliness... Greaaaattttt poem... 007

Pain drizzles through your lines like tears and makes their way into the reader's heart.
So much emotion set forth in this piece and loss of all hope so very evident in your ending ....

The profound ugliness of my future
That if I really had one
Is full of pain, misery and torture
Agonizing darkness, no place for the sun
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I can feel the heartache in these lines.

Sad, touching piece you've penned!
Luanne