This...is...amazing!!
so full of emotion and anger and pain
this is the kind of poetry i love...were you can actually feel what the writer is going through
Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.
Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.
Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.
Wow. this is amazing. It gives you the sense of being in that darkness and at that brink and edge. It's an amazing visualization! You've got a lot of potential if you continue to write like this!