Wow, nice collaboration. was a little bumpy the second & 3rd stanzas. but overall i did enjoy reading it cuz i feel simliar. I love reading poems i can relate to you. :)

Take care -n- Keep it up!

I like, I like. It flows has a griping emotion, and most of all brings back memeries of a lost love. Sociopathiclips is right it should be a song..... need to fix verse 5 2nd line what has 2 t's

I enjoyed 5/5

I like the general message and the feeling to the poem but there are two things I would like to point out.
1] the rhyme scheme is off, it might be better if the scheme was the same throughout the poem. Not every stanza has to rhyme the same but the poem sounds better in general if there is some sort of recognizable pattern to it.
2] there are some grammar mistakes that a proof reader could point out to you. I won't point every single one out unless you'd like me to.
I give this poem a 4/5 though. It's still definately worth reading. ^.^

Amazing