Hidden Truths and Broken Lies

by Mommy And Me   Jan 30, 2008


Hidden Truths And Broken Lies

Shattered dreams upon pillow tops--
With out a shadow to cast,
Broken thoughts buried within blankets...
With out a tear to show.

Sitting here with in the computer screen;
I type the words that I can not speak.
Knowing what is to come--
Yet not able to speak a word.

Always sitting, never waiting--
Always thinking, never doing --
Always crying, never smiling --
Always her... Never me --

Words upon thoughts,
Will not cast a shadow.
Tears upon truth,
Will allow hearts to grow.

Hidden truths become...
Broken lies turn into ....
Pillows full of shattered tears.
...and non are mine to shed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This poem was very emotional vey expressive. i love the flow and the detail you put into it. it was beautiful in every way. a very wisely worded poem. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great poem felt a great kinda rhythym in it great emotion you put into it keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    You have transferred your emotions in this poem quite well... I could feel the sadening words pierce my soul as I was reading it. Great job baby girl! keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    I like how you put together your things describibng your state&feelings and material things (especially in the beginning)
    dreams+pillow, thoughts+blankets, words+comp.screen...
    It makes your feelings so real in this poem

    and the wording is beautiful

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