I like how you put together your things describibng your state&feelings and material things (especially in the beginning)
dreams+pillow, thoughts+blankets, words+comp.screen...
It makes your feelings so real in this poem

and the wording is beautiful

You have transferred your emotions in this poem quite well... I could feel the sadening words pierce my soul as I was reading it. Great job baby girl! keep up the good work! 5/5

Great poem felt a great kinda rhythym in it great emotion you put into it keep up the good work

This poem was very emotional vey expressive. i love the flow and the detail you put into it. it was beautiful in every way. a very wisely worded poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.