It's interesting. Not really something I'm into but I do like the imagery. Pretty sharp in parts especially by using "penny out of a dime", "every cereal box", and such little snippets. I even liked the allusion to Goldilocks. It grants a better depth. Flows rather well though it goes from one concept to another yet maintains a certain sameness to it. Fourth line...it seems a bit off-ish to me. Not sure how. But still this piece kept my attention.
~Faith-less