Lost - I Don't Know Where To Go.

by Richelle   Jan 30, 2008


My heart has grown so strong,
For someone like you.
Would it be so wrong,
To say you love me too?

I'll get down on my knees,
And I'll pray to the Lord above.
Maybe he can put me at ease,
Of this hardship called Love.

I'll tell God that I love you,
And that I can't let you go.
I'll let him know I need you,
I really hope he'll show.

Show me which way to turn,
And show me what to do.
You're not feeling this burn,
You don't know what I'm going through.

So listen to me and talk to me,
I want to work this through.
I want you to realize and see,
How much I have fallen in love with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    Wow, that was really good. It flowed rather smoothly the whole way through it conveyed your feelings with power.

    "I really hope he'll show."

    ^That line seemed a little abrupt to me. He'll show what? You didn't really specify and by itself it doesn't work so well.

    I did really like how you capitalized the word Love. It added a little more strength to the basis of the poem. So that was a good thought there.

    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Very strong

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