Very strong

Wow, that was really good. It flowed rather smoothly the whole way through it conveyed your feelings with power.

"I really hope he'll show."

^That line seemed a little abrupt to me. He'll show what? You didn't really specify and by itself it doesn't work so well.

I did really like how you capitalized the word Love. It added a little more strength to the basis of the poem. So that was a good thought there.

Take care.