Not now.Not Today.

by Freedom   Jan 30, 2008


Snow was bright that day
I remember.
You looked to my eyes and said
You found someone better.

Words so cruel..
Words so true..
The damage you did.-
You will never knew.

Did I deserve?
Did I deserve all this?
Were your purpose to kill me
inside?
Congratulations boy,you did it right.

Now she left you,
And you want back to my way
Boy,don't be naive
I'm not a toy to be played.

Under the dark sky
So many tears I cry.
No.
We will not be together again.
Not now.Not today.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Really great poem. Glad you arent letting him play you. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow this is really one of ur bests
    loved it
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    So cute

    especially i like the way u begin&end the poem:
    "Snow was bright that day"
    and
    "Under the dark sky"

    it makes the atmosphere of the poem change
    and this picture and charm to this sad story

    Lizaveta

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Nice work..5/5..keep it up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    GREAT JOB ON THIS POEM...I CAN TRULY RELATE...THANKS FOR THE COMMENT.

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