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by Noir
"heart's have turned into stones killed white dove" I love the symbolism in this poem, for example white symbolizes pure and innocence and dove symbolize peace. I think if you turned the word "stones" for stone. It would have a better impact... Also I think the lines: Looking for (the) awoke(en) soulWould bring the reader more into the poem, just a thought... All in all, this is a pretty good poem, which uses metaphor...Alot of poems, I see today, fail to do that.
by Heer
Thanks for the advice
by Erickson
Great ones, especially .heart's have turned into stone killed white dove. keep it up.