by Kristi White Jan 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Ratings/comments returned 2 fold |
by JustKristina
This is a very sweet poem written from the heart. I love the innocence of this and how pure it is. Wonderful flow and rhythem. i feel that the rhyming could be a little better in some places.. or taken completly out. But you did a pretty good job on this. Keep up the great work :] |