by StonedGooberz Jan 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
So many poems I have written |
by Mr Rhee
I somewhat agree with the two comments above. It's a very good write, although the last stanza throws me off just a leeeeeelte bit. BUT....all the emotion does come through, none the less. All in all, a very good love poem. Good job. |
by tears i cry
It was great the last line does make sense |
by No one
Yeah, sweet poem... But last line doesn't make sense... |