Comments : What happened to originality?

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicja B

    Good poem!
    We dance a new tango
    in time to the beat
    Turning and swirling
    but our feet never meet
    that is a great beginning to a great poem. it is really gets the message across. i would really appreciate it you would comment and rate my poem if you like.
    Marionettes, puppets, and manikins galore.
    it has the same message as your poem. please tell me what you think of it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicja B

    P.s. 5/5 :)