by Poet on the Piano Jan 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Will you please just come and stay, |
by Teria
Hmm, I think I really really like this poem. There were a few spots that I kind of thought were off a bit, more in the matter of emotion than flow. But, overall you did a wonderful, wonderful job. |
by she
Totally 5/5 |
Wow i absolutely love this poem i mean the deepth behind the words are just amazzing i love the way you wrote it it had true sincerity to it 5/5 <33 |