Wow i absolutely love this poem i mean the deepth behind the words are just amazzing i love the way you wrote it it had true sincerity to it 5/5 <33

Totally 5/5

Hmm, I think I really really like this poem. There were a few spots that I kind of thought were off a bit, more in the matter of emotion than flow. But, overall you did a wonderful, wonderful job.

Keep it up, dear.