Indescribable

by Poet on the Piano   Jan 30, 2008


The sweet sincerity in your voice,
Echoes inside of my heart,
Your talking, such a beautiful noise,
That will never keep us apart.

The warmth in your hands,
Makes me never be cold,
Like the soft summer sand,
That slowly unfolds.

Your eyes so filled with love,
One look upon them makes my day,
As pretty and innocent as a dove,
Making me speechless in what to say.

Your lips always form the kindest words,
That help me get along and cope,
Like the singing of a morning bird,
That gives out a message of hope.

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  • 16 years ago

    by iTdOnTmAtTeR

    I love the images u give, lyk with the dove and how the summer folds...it was very nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "Your talking, . . . " << There doesn't need to be a comma in there, and your should be " you're" for you are.

    I'm not sure if I liked how you compared it to a dove, it's kind of used so often. The whole comparing to 'bird's thing wasn't bad at all, I actually enjoyed how you did so there. . . But, dove is used in soo many love poems. And, there just has to be another thing as beautiful and as peaceful out there. "Dove" Doesn't even SOUND that beautiful, lol.

    But, they are. I know that

    Wonderful job, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    This is a really nice poem keep on writing stuff like this
    i can really feel wat ur feeling through this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww so adorable !! i wish you two the best of luck hunn ! you did a great job with word choice and expressing your true feelings 5/5 <33

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