Aww so adorable !! i wish you two the best of luck hunn ! you did a great job with word choice and expressing your true feelings 5/5 <33

This is a really nice poem keep on writing stuff like this
i can really feel wat ur feeling through this poem

"Your talking, . . . " << There doesn't need to be a comma in there, and your should be " you're" for you are.

I'm not sure if I liked how you compared it to a dove, it's kind of used so often. The whole comparing to 'bird's thing wasn't bad at all, I actually enjoyed how you did so there. . . But, dove is used in soo many love poems. And, there just has to be another thing as beautiful and as peaceful out there. "Dove" Doesn't even SOUND that beautiful, lol.

But, they are. I know that

Wonderful job, keep it up.

I love the images u give, lyk with the dove and how the summer folds...it was very nice.