Comments : Twisted fate or cruel reality?

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Love this one hun actually sounds like some stuff i went through with my ex...your an amazing writer...5/5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I was not granted the dying breaths to mutter
    "i forgive you for the torture you put me through
    and after just throwing me in the gutter"
    after these dying thoughts, to heaven i flew

    ^^^A very sad ending to a sad poem Tabi!
    But the fact that you forgave him, gave the poem a really nice twist:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid