Take My Breath Away(Triolet)

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 31, 2008


The only answers I'll ever need, is in your eyes.
Every time I see you, you take my breath away.
Hearing your voice is like a Christmas surprise.
The only answers I'll ever need, is in your eyes.
Looking at an angel from heaven that abides.
And when the sun sets at the end of the day.
The only answers I'll ever need is in your eyes.
Every time I see you, you take my breath away.

Triolet is a poem that uses the pattern below:

A
B
a
A
a
b
A
B
*The capitol letters are the lines that you repeat.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great work on this one! i love the purness and innocent nature of it! It was great.. i've never seen this type of poem before, but i loved it! You really did a great job with it! Keep it up! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A truely nice poem. The structure was one of those I didn't see before, and for that I was amused. The rhyming and raw emotions really did their work. Nice job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    I like it. although the rhyming does seem allitle forced it is a captured something different there. dunno wat u were trying to say by those a b things but oh well. please comment on my newest poem thanks.

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