Comments : I'm moving on

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is sad. beautiful poem. keep your head up, it'll work out. god bless

  • 16 years ago

    by IMissYou

    My ex left me crying at my front door and now i've found someone better he's really annoyed at me so i can really relate to this poem! I loved it by the way lol keep up the good work..x

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Thats so great thats what im going through right now but i hope it works out with you!

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    My boyfriend was cheating on me and i havent stopped crying for the past 2 days...hopefully a new better guy will come along....but yea i know our songs havent stopped playing o nthe radio and music channels....: (

  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    This is amazing...
    i really really like this alot!
    you are a great writer!
    i can completly relate to this....

    <3
    XxAshleyxX

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    Amazingi just love it

  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Aww great poem. i like the end. it shows your a strong girl && you can pick yourself up && move on. good for you. alot of people can relate to this. 5/5 nice rhymes too!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crazy n luv

    Wow that was really good!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    5/5