Ill be there

by Silent Angel   Jan 31, 2008


The life that I entered a long time ago,
The things that would happen for I would never know.
My life all changed on one cold night,
The hearts of two would somehow end their flight.
she wants to pretend that its all just a dream,
she wishes that that love itself would redeem.
her mind not knowing,
the last word to call,
the noise turns to silence,
as she walks down the hall

The life that is now,
is innocent and true,
for their emotions are pieced,
not broken or blue.
An offer of love,
An everlasting care,
I want you to know,
that for you ill be there.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Angel

    Thank you. they do have a twist in them. to kind of show what happens in the beggining to end. it helps show what ive gone through or am goin through

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Great flow. This is a wonderful piece. I've noticed that most of your poems have a twisted sentimental piecing to it. It's nice to see. keep it up 5/5
    kat

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Beautifuly written. You expressed it perfectly. Good rhymes and rhythm. One of the best I've read so far. 5/5