Is it over

by cicek   Jan 31, 2008


Are our times of heart break and searching for the one over?
could you be the one i kiss forever?
and say i love you every day and every night for the rest of my life?

every day i pray that we can make it through cause baby without you theres no beat in my heart and no air to breath.
without you theres no sun to brighten up my days and my life would seem so gray. i need you in my life and not just as a friend but as a man i can loveand can love me back as a man that can stay loyal and i can trust for life...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is nice, short but a great work, i love the flow and the questions, i guess everybody ask themselves those at one time in life, great work, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    Really nice poem... I'll pm you with tips ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sander

    Wow, very nice poem! I really like it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by A Good Man

    I know where ur coming from on this.
    I went through something like that when I used to have a girl.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Again, great flow... i love it!