Very well put. I think you worded this from your mother's perspective quite well. I am very impressed!
*ME*

Wow. i don't know that i could word things from my mom's perspective. very very well tackled challenge

I like how it was written and how you wrote it from how she felt. goodwrite.

question: has she read it?

WOW! That is really good- I feel like crying, Im very emotional, but that was so heart hitting, it makes me want to go give my mom a hug.. its true and it sucks, how as we get older, we drift from our mothers..!