If you mean what you have said then i can tell that guy is super lucky, |
by Kaila
I absolutly love this poem... it is beautiful and it flows great... |
by DoWnToWn
I love the poem... you're very lucky to find someone dat you love so much! |
by Mike Martin
I agree with all the coments...you are so very lucky....most of us never find that...be happy....I love this poem....xoxoxo |
by Arun Khan
Thats such a sweeet poem! keeep it uup! :D :D |
by Bryce
I think this has to much wording describing one thing, but i really enjoyed it. |
Nice poem |
Alright, again like the previous comment I left, the structure needs work, it's like you're writting a paragraph, making it into stanzas would be a help. |