by cicek Jan 31, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I dont know what to think or even to say. |
After all one gets a reason to live and die for each other .. Tatz love, Thatz love........ Marvellous |
Very nice. relates to a lot of people. keep up the good work. |
by Alvaro
=] last 4 lines made me chuckle a bit.. for how true it is and how it plays a role in my life so far.. thank you.. for capturing such a feeling in simple words, thank you 5/5 |
Wow, ok, first of all the structure is horrible, it's like you're writting a paragraph. Perhaps making it into stanzas would be a major help. |
by Bryce
To tell you the truth, I likes this one. |