Comments : FOR MY ALMOST BABY

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww its adorable!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I like this :)
    i like the boat and the shore part alot

    keep writing
    i will be reading

  • 16 years ago

    by BRiTT

    I rly like this one, its sweet 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by maria

    I love your poems they touch my heart in everyway. I hope one day you find the secret of love hearts floating every direction of the pretty blue sky that the stars will shine upon you each night with your beauty that will someday connect you to someone who will deeply respectly love you back.

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    I thought this piece was sweet and deep, yet simple. Great Job!