Great writing great emotion you did great when you get a chance check out my poem "the lost king of cause" i think you'll like it

The intensity of the heart never leaves us but who's to say that hearts don't change and you may miss out at the light at the end of the tunnel. For the joy at the end of pain can be more full and better. Don't give up, ever.

I feel tht same after mi boifriend left me and mi dad died