Awww that is sooo awsome man
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Okay so its good then:P

This is cute. I like the concept of it, but it could use a little more depth to it. It also could use punctuation and you need to correct any grammar errors. Don't use single letters to spell out hole words. What I mean by that is don't use U in the place of the word you. It takes away from the sentimental value of the poem. You should also capitalize any single use of the letter I. After these few minor changes has been made and a little more emotion and imagery are added, this will be a beautiful poem. Good job though!

Letty