If you were wanting to bring excitement to your readers, job well done!!

Yes very well done. I liked it a lot.

Excellent and vivid. I'm getting the desire to have sex during the poem

Wowwww my heart can't take these hot
ones lol good stuff

Sorry it took so long 4 me 2 get back @ u a lil busy with work but that wuz very refreshing i think its motivate'n me 2 wanna do somethin lol i like it very visual

Overwhelmingly erotic!

I love the intensity that you used in this poem. I love the forcefulness and how hard you two came. Good job

I love the intensity that you used in this poem. I love the forcefulness and how hard you two came. Good job