You took my heart
by Mike Jan 31, 2008
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I gave you my heart, and its gone. i trusted you to be careful wit hit but it dropped and shattered. Now i'm nothing but i corpse lying on the cold ground where u left me |
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16 years ago
I really liked it.
It made me remember bad thoughts but still, very good.
Tip: Don't use "U" as an abbreviation. Just write it out, it only takes a second and makes the writing sound more sophisticated.
Good job. Keep it up. XD
