by Shinobi
Well, it's a haiku so I didn't expect it to be long, as it is. The words, although not plenty have strong meaning. You pasted a strong idea of freedome inside that metaphore. Nice work 5/5 |
by Blissful
Another short sweet and to the point poem. The words you choose fit your message perfectly and the imagery was just flawless which made the haiku even more fun to read. Well done *5/5* |
Okay, first of all. This poem makes me feel happy, as I can picture a beautiful butterfly spreading their wings and going to a happy place somewhere beyond the forest. I think why you wrote this poem was that maybe you had the feeling of hatred, and all you wanted to do was get away from such a feeling and explore so you could find happiness again. I could be 100% wrong, but as a reader, that's kind of what I saw. :) Great job, 5/5. |
This one made me think of beautiful oder untainted by defects very profound |