Magic

by Spirit   Feb 1, 2008


A
Completely
Unselfish desire
That means the world to me
Something that I truly want more than anything else
A hope that what I need will soon be mine
A chance that my dreams would
Become reality on time
My one true want
My one and only need
The one thing I can't live without
This is the one hunger that I can never feed
A wish,
From me
For life
To be
For all
To share
Magic is
In the air
It's here
Right now
One may
Think how
For life
Will not
Make all
Magic stop.

*A concrete poem. Copy and paste to Microsoft Word and hit the "center" button to see the right picture.*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This made me wish opon the star at the top of a migic wand

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Oooooo I love concrete poems, the way they're long and flowy and then short and punchy. Although I've never been able to write a half decent one. I really like the natural flow that all of your poems seem to have, you're obviously a very naturally talented poet! 5/5 once again,

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh I just loved the words you used here and the style you choose to write in was unique and interesting. I loved how the lines got shorter as the poem progressed because it built suspense. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Copied and pasted to the word and saw what you ment, this is a nice trick. The poem itself is nice, also I didn't really like the cute ending. The rhyming and flow were good, structure was unique. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    I like this one alot. it's also different, but it's a good different.

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