A Garden

This is beautiful...

I like how you switched from beautiful to wild, I found the transition to make a powerful affect on the overall piece.

The imagery you portray in this piece is stunning, it creates such vivid pictures in my mind, it's like I can -see- everything that you're describing.

The flow was faultless throughout, just rolled right of the tongue, and I found this to be both original and unique in concept.

Beautiful!

This made me think of the balance of human nature

I agree - nice work, I think the weeds would agree also.

I love the way that you twist the language so that I would actually prefer to be the second garden "tenant." A really clever metaphor with twoo great contrasting sections that have so many similarities at the same time. My favourite lines were:

"But Wild
Forever Free
Demanding Love"

5/5

Em xXx

I just loved your choice of words here .. it created flawless imagery. They were very expressive and created a welcoming mood. Short sweet and to the point. Well done *5/5*