Okay im a little confused....i thought this poem was like about everything in life...and then i get to the ending and i dont really know what its about... it flowed good though and the rhyming was great so i give you a 4/5.

Ok this is about me moving away. My boyfriend feels like I've betrayed him but says he'll never leave me. It's trying to say that, even though were still together and there's not really anything to fix, I want to erase what I've done. Any ideas on how I can make it less confusing?

Thanks =)

Em xXx

Ohhhh ok. well im not really sure how i can help but i can try...

maybe should should write something like this

I want to fix this with tape and glue,
because i know its so hard to say goodbye.
I want to mend it with an "I love you,"
to maybe release some pain inside.
I want to stitch the thread that's unravelled,
i hope you keep me stitched in your heart.
I want to reverse the miles that I've travelled,
because we may be drifting apart.
I want to repair the mirror that I shattered,
When i found out that i had to leave.
I want to patch up the blanket that's tattered,
with stained teardrops from pain and grieve.
I want to restore the building that's crumbling,
and my wall that use to be up so high.
I want to help up the young child who's stumbling,(i think you should take this line out) and add..
i want someone to keep me from stumbling,
and keep telling me our love is not a lie.
But there's nothing I can do,
there's no words to be spoken.
There's nothing to fix,our love is true,
And honey we are not broken.

im not sure if you like that idea..but its just a suggestion...=]