Lovely Moon

by Fanny   Feb 1, 2008


Theres a lot i have to say
but i don't know how to say it in a way
at night outside i lay
i see the moon
and i start humming a tune
i start thinking that I'm going to be with you soon
i love your smile
we live close but i feel like its 1 mile
your the guy , your my style
Lovely Moon
ill be with you soon
we barley met
but you will be with me and thats my bet
and its a goal I'm going to set
your my Lovely Moon
and like i said I'm going to be with you soon
Victor your handsome as a moon

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  • 16 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    Cute poem :)
    I liked it. The rhymes were good and your feelings for this "voctor fellow" shows :P
    Haha I wish you both the best of luck, and keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Texastar

    Bravo! *claps* Take a bow girl!
    That has to be one of you best yet. I bet you will make more but none will be this best ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Wow very good poem and thanks for the suggestion!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Dang girl this is an awsome poem ever i loved it so much words could not explain i loved the way you put it and the way you discribed victor very good i give you a 5/5 kasia

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Again another good one nice flow good
    rhyming nice job

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