Forever and ever

by Nelle   Feb 1, 2008


The days are going by so fast.
I wish our time together would last.
I know it can't, and it's not okay.
I don't want you to go, not even for a day.

We have gotten so much closer as time has passed.
You came into my life right before it crashed.
You have held my hand through all of the pain.
Courage, and strength are two things that you helped me gain.

You led me down the path that was right.
You made me see there is more to life than fright.
With the touch of your love always on my face.
I will have the power to win this life of a race.

I will love you forever, no matter what you say
I promise to tell you I love you at the end of the day
I know in my heart that our friendship is real
Friends forever and ever was the deal

01/31/08

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awww, that was so sweet. You're really lucky to have a friend like that. I have a few friends like that. Well, we're actually growing apart.. but I think they would still be there for me if I needed them. The flow and rhymes were good. Maybe use some more metaphores or descriptive words? Haha, I'm trying to think of something to say so you can improve it, but really I like it how it is. Well, anyways, I loved it, and I think you did an amazingly wonderful job! :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw a very sweet and passoniate
    friendship poem. I really like the love
    you showed for this person and how
    much you care for htem.
    WEll done.
    5/5
    <3tay

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    From the title, I can feel that this poem is really sweet. Also, I really love your rhyme scheme. Overall it's well written poem. 5/5 definitely!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    That was really good as well. Sounds like this person is really dear to you. I think everyone needs people like that in their lives. Especially if they've had to deal with a death.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    I think that if you take out
    AND EVER
    the flow might fit a bit better
    but it is your poem so you don't have to
    thanks for the read

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