Wow...This poem expresses so much emotion...

It was heartbreaking and sad...
I can relate a lot, too; I'm in a similar situation right now, yet i haven't decided what to finally do...
Superb write, keep it up!

Pst. If you wrote a longer one you could submit it anyway, i for one would like to read it all. If you decide so, let me know.
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Ilove it is one of mt favs its great...