I love this piece, it is very complex and original, filled with excellently expressed emotions. Very refreshing poem. I can relate to this in a way. I like your choice of words and remarkable descriptions- you created very vivid imagery from the beginning to the end.
I can't choose my favorite part, every stanza is equally amazing.
Keep writing!

Very creative poem, it is filled with amount of excellently expressed feelings and it posses some inner beauty.
You choice of words is good and you described your topic on a also excellent way, truly great piece, it is very unique too.
I enjoyed in every line.