Overcommerisalised

by Gizmo   Feb 1, 2008


Okay, my arms are bleeding, check!
i've went down the right way too!
i think i've done it deep enough,
so now i'll lie here and think of you!

wait, thats kinda starting to hurt now,
it didn't look sore when it was on t.v!
weres all the drama i saw in that film?
theres more blood than i thought i'd see.

i'm kinda started to feel sick and tired now,
i don't want to die i just never realised,
i'm just coping what i'm being shown,
its too late, whys sucide over commerisalised.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Danika

    Wow.

    just wow