Wow...
This is one of the most amazing sad poems I've read in a while. It is filled with excellently expressed emotions from the beginning to the end, truly very heartfelt and deeply touching. You created fantastic, very vivid imagery through the whole poem. This piece contains equal amounts of beauty and sadness which is very impressive. I can relate to the things you wrote about in a way.
Amazingly done!
I can't choose my favorite part, I really like evrything about this poem. It's surely going to my favs. list.
You wrote it is interesting format and with good choice of words in every stanza.
Refreshing and original write.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

This is very interesting, I used to be afraid of the dark too... the last stanza is wonderful... loved it, it's just ringing in my mind right now.

Wonderful write... specially the style of writing... short and crisp sentence... loved reading it...

great write.. keep writing..

Beautiful....love it ! 5/5

Excellent write. I love your format or style should I say of writing. It's unique and different from any other poet on here. I love that. Another interesting sad piece from you.. You write in a variety of topics.. a good way to challenge yourself. Great job. 5/5.

The placing of the words and the structures really threw me off, and i think if you just put it together in a short paragraph that it would seem less broken and easier to read. Otherwise, I liked the story and the words used. good yob...